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Along the career of Geography, We've had at many(we)  field trip (wf). I remember that the first year,(P)(^) was very short and near of Santiago, because(ww) in the last year We began to have trip more long(wo),(P) in my second year, I have(wf) my best field trip, the subject it was for the field of Geography Cultural, we went to “Huasco Alto” in Atacama’s third region, although the field doesn’t(^) my favorite, the place was wonderful. Here still they live communities “Diaguitas”(wo) and are important part of our cultural heritage. The weather was very banker, in the morning was cold and in the evening was hot. In this trip, we made a job very important, applying an ethnographic methodology and we learnt much with the people. In this time the communities Diaguitas (wo) had(wf) the problem of Pascua Lama, because the water of the river “Huasco” would be affected for the miners(ww), and for this(we) the agriculture.

Another field trip that I liked, was the last year when we went to “San Clemente” in the VII region. This field trip, was very special because the place it’s very beautiful and mystic… here they realize tourism “Ufologic”(wo), indeed various companions of class were afraid!.

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Along the career of Geography, We've had a lot of field trips. I remember that the first year the field trips was very short and near of Santiago,since in the last year we began to have more long trips. In my second year I had my best field trip, the subject it was for the field of Geography Cultural, we went to “Huasco Alto” in Atacama’s third region, although the field doesn’t is my favorite, the place was wonderful. Here still they live Diaguitas communities and are important part of our cultural heritage. The weather was very banker, in the morning was cold and in the evening was hot. In this trip, we made a job very important, applying an ethnographic methodology and we learnt much with the people. In this time the Diaguitas communities have a problem with Pascua Lama, because the water of the river “Huasco” would be affected for the mining, and also the agriculture.

Another field trip that I liked, was the last year when we went to “San Clemente” in the VII region. This field trip, was very special because the place it’s very beautiful and mystic… here they realize Ufologic tourism, indeed various companions of class were afraid!.